Year 4

In Year 4 we are writing narratives to publish using our laptops. While we are writing we are remembering to structure a story, experiment with our vocabulary, and proofread our work to check for errors. Once we have finished we will email these to Miss Rachel and she will have meetings with us to discuss our writing goals, and explore any improvements that we may be able to make. Here's some stories we have written:

A Rabbit Called Bugs Bunny

'Once upon a time there was a rabbit called Bugs Bunny. He got a carrot and then an animal catcher came to get him. Then Bugs Bunny lost him and the catcher went back to his job.'       

Written by Tayven  Yr 4 6 August 2024

  The Day We Got Lost

   Chapter 1 Written by Lilly Year 4 

'We decided to go for a walk in the jungle. We saw this beautiful waterfall with blue water, so pretty. We went into the jungle and we saw so many pretty things. We went  so far into the jungle it was so pretty. We've seen so much stuff but we found out that we couldn't see our way back. It all looked the same, it was starting to get dark. We were getting scared. It was terrifying! We heard westling  in the bushes and scoring in the trees .And howling. We were really scared. We did not  know what  to do. Then Aaliyah ran off and me and Sofia did not know what to do. We were calling out her name,  we were starting to panic  but then we heard a scream. It sounded like Aaliyah. She came running to us  and it was really nice to see her.  The next day we  met this elf and her name was Emily she gave us heaps  of fruit and Water. We were so happy.

In the night we had a fire. All of a sudden heaps of bears surrounded it so we all ran into  the cabin and locked the door.

After two weeks  of  being stranded in the middle of the jungle we built a cabin. In the cabin there was a fireplace and wooden beds with moss on them. 

BUZZ Turns out everything was just a dream and after that day I was really happy to be back with all my friends .'